Sunday, September 30, 2012

What makes a good character?

Zoe Zeng is a 15 years old girl. She has black short hair, blue eyes, and is 173cm tall. She was born in China and she grew up in England. Hew mother is an English and her father is a Chinese. Her mother is a pianist and her father is a photographer. Their jobs are very busy and they only stay with Zoe during the holidays so Zoe lives with her grandmother and her sister, Caroline. Her sister Caroline is 2 years elder than her. However, they look very different. Caroline has blonde hair, black eyes, and is 186cm tall. She went to France for high school and become a model. Zoe is a very open and optimistic student, her grades are at the average level, and she is extremely good at tennis. She started to learn tennis since she was 7 years old, and she won some games. In contrast, she is very bad at anything related to music, like singing or playing piano.

2 comments:

  1. it seems like Zoe is lonely since her parents can't be with her. Even though the description here is about her appearance and interest, i believe it can extend as a good story!

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  2. I can clearly picture both Caroline and Zoe based on your descriptions. You can also give more descriptions on Zoe's personalities. For example, how she deal with life events. This could be an interesting story. I would also like to see how Zoe reacts to hie parents being seldom home.

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